Fan Fiction

Discovering Love COMPLETED

by christina

Chapter 16

Discovering Love

Chapter 14

CLUB RR

Ron: Ray, why the long face?
Ray: Qian is mad at me
Ron: What did you do to her?
Ray: That’s the problem. I don't know
Ron: Why don’t you do something special for her
Ray: Like what?
Ron: How should I know?
Ray: :sign: I’m going to take a walk. See you tonight?
Ron: Bye

QIAN’ S HOUSE

Nancy: Qian, are you sure you don't want to come?
Qian: Yea, I just want to stay home
Tavia: Did you and Ray argue?
Qian: I thought you guys hated him?
Nancy: We don't hate him. We just dislike what he does
Qian: :sign: I think Ray is cheating on me
Tavia and Nancy: WHAT!?!
Tavia: How do you know?
Qian: I over heard him and Ron talking
Nancy: I don't believe this
Tavia: Are you sure you heard it, right?
Qian: :sign: I don't know. I'm so confuse!
Tavia: Nancy, I don't feel like going anymore
Nancy: Same here
Qian: No! You two go. Beside I want time alone. To think. Go and have fun.
Tavia: Are you sure?
Qian: ( smiling ) Positive!
Tavia and Nancy: Bye, Qian!
Qian: Bye! Have fun!

When Tavia and Nancy left, Qian start to cry. Qian pick up her cell. She was about to call Ray, but hang up.

Qian: Ray. I miss you so much! ( crying )

Ray came back from his walk and saw Ron fixing his hair

Ray: Where are you going?
Ron: To a party
Ray: Who party is it?
Ron: Amanda
Ray: Who is she?
Ron: Girl, I meet earlier
Ray: Well, have fun
Ron: You’re coming with me
Ray: No, I’m not
Ron: Yes, you’re!
Ray: I don't feel right. Going to a party without Qian
Ron: It’s just a party. It’s not like you’re cheating on her
Ray: Well...
Ron: Hurry, and get dress! We have to be there by 8pm.
Ray: Ok

PARTY

Tavia: I’m worry for Qian. Lets go back
Nancy: Tavia, Qian wants to be alone. Lets give her some space
Tavia: :sign: Ok
Amanda: Hey, you guys!
Tavia: Hey, Amanda. This is a great place you have
Amanda: Thanks, Where is Qian?
Nancy: Qian, isn't feeling well.
Amanda: Talk to you guys later
Tavia: See yea

Amanda: Finally!
Ron: Sorry, I’m late. My friend Ray here took forever!
Amanda: Nice to meet you
Ray: Nice to meet you too
Amanda: Want a drink?
Ray: No, thanks.
Ron: Come on, Amanda. Lets dance
Amanda: Ok

It was midnight and Ray was driving home. While Ray was driving home he saw a man following a woman. Ray knew that the man was going to do something to the woman so he follow them

Tavia: Hello?
Nancy: Tavia, where are you?
Tavia: Walking home
Nancy: Walking! Are you crazy! It’s midnight!
Tavia: Don't worry. See you later. Bye

When Tavia hang up her cell. She saw a shadow.

TAVIA’S P.O.V

Someone must be following me. Oh.. No! This is a dead end. Stupid Nancy! She had to call me!

END OF P.O.V

All of a sudden Tavia trip and then the man walk up to her holding a knife

Man: Give me all of your money!
Tavia: I don't have any!
Man: Don't lie to me!
Tavia: I’m not! If you don't leave I'm going to arrest you!
Man: What are you a cop? ( smiling )
Tavia: That’s right

Tavia took out her badge and show it to the man

Tavia: You are under arrest!
Man: Get her boys!
Tavia: What the..

Two guys grab Tavia from the back. Tavia struggle to get out of the grip, but the two men were too strong for her

Man: Since you don't have any money. I guess I will have to sleep with you! ( smiling )
Tavia: Don't even think about touching me! Get off of me!
Man: Hold still or I’ll cut you!
Ray: Let her go!
Man: This is none of your business pretty boy!
Ray: What if I make it my business!
Man: You’re going to regret this!

The man turn around and stab Ray on the shoulder

Ray: You bastard!

Ray jump on the man and start to beat him up. The other two guys let go of Tavia. One of the guys took out a knife. Tavia turn around punch the guy with the knife

Man 2: You’re going to pay!

The man was about to stab Tavia, but luckily Ray took the dive for her. Ray took the man knife and stab him back

Man 1: Lets go!

Ray: Are you ok? ( breathing hard )
Tavia: Ray? Raymond Lam?

Then Ray faint

Tavia: Ray! Ray!

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