Fan Fiction

Discovering Love COMPLETED

by christina

Chapter 20

Discovering Love

QIAN’S HOUSE

Qian: Who is it?
Ken: It’s me, Ken

Qian open the door and let Ken in

Qian: Ken, what brings you here?
Ken: I came here for the notebook
Qian: Oh.. I’ll get for you
Ken: Thanks

Qian went inside her room to get the notebook

Qian: Here ( giving the notebook to Ken )
Ken: Thanks
Qian: Ken, who are you going to give the notebook to? You can’t give it to Tong Sir
Ken: Chan Sir, will be handling your case
Qian: Oh.. Ok
Ken: Qian, I want to ask you something
Qian: Yea?
Ken: Are you in love with, Ray?
Qian: What are you talking about?
Ken: Qian, I can tell that you love Ray.
Qian: Uh.. I don’t know what you’re talking about
Ken: Qian, you know that you and Ray have no future
Qian: I.. I know, Ken
Ken: Qian, I’m going to take you off this case
Qian: What?!? You can’t do that
Ken: Qian, I don’t want you to get hurt. The longer you’re with Ray, the more you’ll fall in love with him.
Qian: :sign: Ken, give me sometime, please
Ken: You have three days to make a decision
Qian: Ok
Ken: Bye, Qian
Qian: Bye

Three days passed and Qian still haven’t made a decision. Qian is in her room walking back and fort

Qian: What do I do? I know that I love Ray and I know that he loves me. If I stay with Ray I will have to arrest him myself. But if I breakup with him. Them he’ll know that I was undercover. Oh.. God! What do I do?

Then Qian cell rang

Qian: Hello?
Chan Sir: Qian, this is Chan Sir
Qian: Can I help you Chan Sir?
Chan Sir: We just discover something
Qian: What?
Chan Sir: Michelle Yip is related to Ray
Qian: What?!? Are you sure you didn’t make a mistake?
Chan Sir: I’m positive. Michelle is Ray’s cousin. Qian I think you should..
Qian: I.. I know what to do, Chan Sir

Qian hang up her cell and then she went over to Ray’s house

RAY’S HOUSE

Ray: Hey Qian, what brings you here?
Qian: I need to talk to you
Ray: Ok.. Come in
Qian: Ray do you know Michelle Yip?
Ray: Uh…
Qian: The one that works at the police station.
Ray: I.. Uh.. No.. I don’t know her
Qian: ( crying ) I knew you were going to say that
Ray: Qian, why are you crying?
Qian: You lied to me again, Ray
Ray: Qian.. I..
Qian: Michelle is your cousin!
Ray: How.. How did you find out?
Qian: Why did you have to lie to me?
Ray: Qian.. I didn’t mean to
Qian: Michelle is undercover isn’t she?
Ray: Um..
Qian: Is she undercover, Ray?
Ray: Yes
Qian: She’s undercover because you want to kill Ken. Am I right?
Ray: Qian.. It’s not what you think
Qian: Ray, don’t lie to me anymore, please ( crying )
Ray: Yes, she is undercover because she wants to kill Ken
Qian: Why? Why does she want to kill Ken?
Ray: I.. I can’t tell you.
Qian: ( crying ) I’m disappoint in you, Ray

Qian took out the promise from her finger. She walk up to Ray and put the ring in his hand

Ray: ( crying ) Qian.. No.. Don’t
Qian: Ray, We are over!

Then Qian left

Ray: ( crying ) Qian!

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