Fan Fiction

Discovering Love COMPLETED

by christina

Chapter 3

Discovering Love

NIGHTIME CLUB RR

Ron: Ray, can you please stop walking around me!
Ray: I can’t! I’m worry for Michelle.
Ron: Dude, calm down. Michelle said she’ll be careful
Ray: Do you really think she’ll be careful?
Ron: No (smiling)
Ray: Argh! I hate waiting

Then someone knocked on the door

Ray: Who the hell is it!
Bill: Uh.. Sorry to bother you, but someone is here to look for you
Ray: Tell him that I’m busy!
Bill: I tried
Ron: Well try harder
Jen: Do you really want me to leave, Ray?
Ray: (turning around) Jen?
Jen: Long time no see
Ron: Damn, what the hell happen to you?

RON P.O.V.

What happen to Jen? Three years ago I wouldn’t even look at her, but now I want to do more then look at her. I wonder if she still likes Ray?

END OF P.O.V

Ron: So.. Jen, what brings you here?
Jen: I came to look for Ray
Ray: What do you want? I’m really not in the mood for games
Jen: Why are you so mean?

Then Jen walked up to Ray and start to play with his hair

Jen: Don’t you like the new me?
Ray: Ron, you can have her

Ray pushed Jen to Ron. Then Ray walked outside the club

Ray: Damn, why is it so dirty out here? I have to tell Bill to clean it later

Then Ray heard someone scream

Someone: Help! Help!

Ray ran to were he heard the scream. Then Ray saw 2 men trying to rape a woman

Ray: Hey! What are you doing!
Man 1: You better leave or else!
Ray: Or else what?

Then Ray took out his gun

Ray: Do you still want to play with me huh! (angry voice)
Man 2: Lets get our of here!

Ray went up to the girl that almost got rape

Ray: Are you ok?
Qian: I’m fine. Thank you for saving my life

RAY P.O.V

Wow! She is gorgeous! I never seen anyone as pretty as this woman. She is even prettier than Michelle.
END OF P.O.V

QIAN P.O.V.

So this is how Raymond Lam looks like. You seem like such a nice guy. Too bad I have to put you in jail

END OF P.O.V

Ray: Uh.. I’m Raymond Lam. You can call me Ray
Qian: I’m Li Qian. You can call me Qian. Nice to meet you Ray.
Ray: Come on

Ray took Qian into his club

Qian: Is this your club?
Ray: Yea, you want something to drink?
Qian: Water

“ Knock “

Ron: Hey, Ray, me and Jen.. Well, well, who is this?
Ray: Qian, this is Ron
Ron: Nice to meet you
Qian: Same here
Ron: Ray, can I talk to you?
Ray: Sure, Qian make yourself comfortable
Ron: Do you like her?
Ray: What is that suppose to mean? Hey! Bill! Get me a glass of water
Bill: Ok
Ron: You haven’t answer me yet
Ray: Well, I don’t know if I like her, but she is gorgeous. Don’t you think so?
Ron: Yea, she’s pretty cute.
Bill: Ray, here is your water
Ray: Thanks
Ron: Well, I’ll leave you and Qian alone
Ray: Have fun with Jen
Ron: I will

POLICE STATION

Jeff: Ken, someone is here to look for you
Ken: Who is it?
Michelle: Hello, Ma Sir
Ken: You? You’re the girl that I saw at the dock
Michelle: You can call me Michelle
Ken: Oh.. Ok. Michelle, can I help you with something?
Michelle: I want to be a cop
Ken: A cop?
Michelle: Can you give me the job?
Ken: Well.. I don’t know. You have to pass a test first
Michelle: What kind of test?
Ken: A physical and written test.
Michelle: Is it hard?
Ken: No, for sure you’ll pass the physical, but the written test I..
Michelle: Well, since you cant help me I guess I’ll leave then. It was nice meeting you

Michelle was about to leave when Ken stop her

Ken: Wait.. Maybe I can arrange something for you?
Michelle: Really?
Ken: Yea
Michelle: Thank You!

Then Michelle hug Ken

KEN P.O.V.

She’s hugging me. What do I do? Do I hug her back?
END OF P.O.V

Michelle: Give me your cell
Ken: Why do you want my cell for?
Michelle: Just give it to me
Ken: Here

Michelle pressed some numbers on Ken’s cell

Michelle: Done. Now you have my number and I have yours (smiling)
Ken: I have your number?
Michelle: Yup.
Ken: Then does that mean I can call you anytime?
Michelle: Of course. (smiling) Well, I better get going. Thanks for your help
Ken: No problem
Michelle; Bye
Ken: Bye

CLUB RR

Ray: Here’s your water
Qian: Thanks. You know you have a really nice club
Ray: Well, the cops doesn’t think that
Qian: What do you mean?
Ray: I guess I should tell you that I’m a gangster.
Qian: Gangster?
Ray: Yea
Qian: Well, are you a good or bad gangster?
Ray: All gangster are bad
Qian: No, that isn’t true. Even though you may be a gangster it doesn’t mean you cant be good. Do you kill innocent people?
Ray: Uh… Well, no. I don’t kill innocent people. I don’t want to get in trouble with the law
Qian: See.. Then you’re not a bad gangster
Ray: I guess so (smiling)
Qian: What time is it?
Ray: Almost midnight
Qian: That late already. Well, bye

Qian headed for the door

Ray: Can I drive you home?
Qian: Uh.. Sure, why don’t

QIAN’S HOUSE

Qian: Thanks for the ride
Ray: No problem
Qian: Well… bye
Ray: Qian! Are you busy tomorrow?
Qian: No
Ray: Do you want to have lunch with me?
Qian: Definitely
Ray: Well.. Bye
Qian: Bye

Tavia: Finally!
Qian: How did you know I was outside?
Nancy: We saw you and the mysteries guy outside the window
Qian: Cant I have privacy?
Tavia: No! who was that guy?
Qian: A friend
Nancy: Qian, you just got fired today.
Qian: So…
Nancy: How could you get a man that quick?
Qian: Aiya! I’m going to take a shower
Tavia: Come on who is he?
Qian: I’m not telling you

Then Qian went to her room. Qian took out a pen and a notebook

WRITING IN THE NOTBOOK

I think Ray has fallen for me. He asked me to go have lunch with him tomorrow.

END OF WRITING

QIAN P.O.V

Why do I feel all warm inside? Should I go to lunch with him tomorrow? Aiya! Why did I take on this task!

END P.O.V